tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588127150250131905.post1821378335003704634..comments2012-12-23T02:18:39.188+13:00Comments on Lavinia @ St Pius X School: Duffy TheatreRoom 3http://www.blogger.com/profile/08721342299643803753noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588127150250131905.post-38863256808558630972010-08-19T15:58:43.857+12:002010-08-19T15:58:43.857+12:00Hi Lavinia
I have enjoyed reading this wonderfull...Hi Lavinia<br /><br />I have enjoyed reading this wonderfully written recount. I do agree with Mr C, you have worked really hard on each sentence starter and have let us know exactly what happened in interesting ways. I also like the way you have organised your thoughts and memories into paragraphs. <br /><br />I can tell that the Duffy Show had a bit impact on you. What a great message they have given you all. Isn't it wonderful to think that you can be ANYTHING you want to be!! <br /><br />Thanks for sharing this with us Lavinia. As always, I'm looking forward to reading more :)Mrs Lainghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02976986653801563062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588127150250131905.post-41984393578214816752010-08-17T11:17:19.499+12:002010-08-17T11:17:19.499+12:00I was so sorry I missed the Duffy Show and now I k...I was so sorry I missed the Duffy Show and now I know exactly what I missed. Your recount tells me just what happened but I like the way you have changed your sentence beginnings to add interest to the reader. Often recounts just say 'this happened and then this happened and then this happened . . .' That can be so boring to he reader. What you have done is keep my interest the whole way through and also focussed on the audience reactions which was great. Well done.Mr Cnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1588127150250131905.post-70761983737790460712010-08-16T12:34:04.262+12:002010-08-16T12:34:04.262+12:00This is a most comprehensive recount and sounds li...This is a most comprehensive recount and sounds like a fun event. I would be most interested to know what Occupation you are most interested in Exploring further for yourself.<br />Mrs BurtMrs Burthttp://manaiakalani.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com